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[Ambient/chillout/orchestral?] Elementia
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| adi_hanson |
A while back i made a track called elementia and someone said it would be better if it had no 4x4 beat and just left alone. So i set to work and smoothed off some of the sounds and tweaked it a little bit.
i can hear a few bits clipping , but other than that i thinks is nearly finished.
Anyways heres the link
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| Nemiard |
The melody and sound is quite lovely. Interesting choice.
I guess constructivly only thing I can suggest is possibly some more minor/subtle effects and sounds to come through at random points in the track.
Although it would seem personal taste, as I do like the movement of the track in its simplicity. Doing this might possibly disturb that feel - Might be a challenge to do so.
Lovely sounding track. |
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| MrJiveBoJingles |
| Have to agree, this has a nice relaxed "spacey" sound to it. I think it works fine as it is, although it does drag a bit in the second half when there's nothing new going on. I think you could either shorten it a little or else put a bit more variation toward the end. |
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| adi_hanson |
cheers for the comments ,
But i dont want to alter the tune as mentioned before enough to ruin it. Maybe a few subtle sweeps? |
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| MrJiveBoJingles |
| Yeah, that would do it I think. |
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| Nemiard |
| yea, sweeps. and very minimal sounds. because of how the song is you would notice even the slightest sound even if it is only quiet/subtle |
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