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Fractured - Speak your mind (trancey breaks)
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| Fractureduk |
hey all, latest song here
Taken it a trancier breaks direction, see what you think :)
www.soundclick.com/fractureduk
thanks
Paul
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| Zombie0729 |
surprised not to see any comments on this, i dig! at some points i think the main lead with the distortion, bitcrushing needs to take a sweep down in the 1k area (just sounds harsh after a while).
love the flips & fills... i'm a man of many of those haha.
piano is a bit too retro for me and i hear a really dissonant tone at the end of the piece, perhaps u have an extra note in your midi file.
other than that dude good job, mix is good.
check out mine when u have a sec:
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...0&forumid=74&s= |
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| Fractureduk |
thanks man, really appreciate you taking the time to listen :)
hmm you reckon the piano should be changed then? That was a bit I was quite proud of but ah well lol. :P
Yeh your right, im gonna sort the lead a lil bit then i'm near enough done on this.
Of course, i'll get straight onto listening matey!
Thanks
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| Fractureduk |
| anyone else had time to listen? thanks :) |
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| Zombie0729 |
paul,
sounds much better! i don't mean to sound naive but are there labels putting this kind of trancey/breaks out? if so i think its worth a demo submission.
however i still hear that really dissonant piano tone at 1:51, your chords and melodies are very smooth and that dissonance ruins it.
good luck
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| Fractureduk |
hey man! glad you like the improvements, yeh your right i think ill get rid of that, its just a slightly off key note that i thought would add something different but it doesnt reli work. Your no more naive than me mate, I have no idea, breaks labels dont seem to be interested, there is one label that really want it but they mainly churn out funky/dirty breaks so i have no idea what to do or where to send it lol.
If anyone has any ideas please do tell me :)
Thanks again
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