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Melodic progressive trance / 130BPM / Trance in production / Full quality
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| pactdonkey |
hi
I like the feel of this song, loving the 'beautiful-ferry corsten' type distorted guitar that drives it...i think the temp could be picked up a bit..maybe to 134? |
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| Evolve140 |
| I suppose you're right :) Pitch control up? Also, thanks for the nice comment. I didn't think Ferry Corsten whatsoever until you mentioned it and it seems you're right! Cheers. |
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| pho mo |
Dude, this sounds great! Starts off with nice ronski speed style metallic hits, comes in with a pumping prog bassline layered with that beautiful distorted synthline and then the rising pads. Awesome transitions too. Beautifully produced and a great tune, simply top stuff mate!
If you're looking for feedback to finish this one, I guess the main thing is its pretty short at 3:47 for a dance tune. The stuff you have there is nice and full and sounds polished, you just need to maybe go to a new motif at some point. Maybe at 3:15 there's a nice transition down to almost nothing ... but then it comes back in with the standard motif. That may be a good split to add a middle section in, but that's up to you, it's your tune :) Good luck! |
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| keithlsp |
| tempo is perfect IMO. song sounds great! keep up the good work!! |
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| Nemiard |
The begining is good, seems nicely planned out. though after 2:10 as it keeps playing it starts to lose its charm, which im sure is becuase the songs not finnished yet.
Perhaps some sort of breakdown is in order? or what was previously said and do a fade out and bring back in style.
Constructive comments: You might need to add some white noise to give it more of an airy feel and help it become a bit more fuller, or add sounds in a heigher key.
Lastly I think you need a stronger bassline, my speakers have the sub cranked but it's hardly making any sound, so you might want to look into a stronger rip snorty bassline.
As I said before I do like the begining, and the Idea for the tune is really cool. So I look forward to see how the track turns out. |
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| Evolve140 |
| quote: | Originally posted by pho mo
Dude, this sounds great! Starts off with nice ronski speed style metallic hits, comes in with a pumping prog bassline layered with that beautiful distorted synthline and then the rising pads. Awesome transitions too. Beautifully produced and a great tune, simply top stuff mate!
If you're looking for feedback to finish this one, I guess the main thing is its pretty short at 3:47 for a dance tune. The stuff you have there is nice and full and sounds polished, you just need to maybe go to a new motif at some point. Maybe at 3:15 there's a nice transition down to almost nothing ... but then it comes back in with the standard motif. That may be a good split to add a middle section in, but that's up to you, it's your tune :) Good luck! |
Thanks a lot for the nice comments! Gonna bang the rest of this tune out this weekend after a short break and a few beers! |
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| Evolve140 |
Hey everyone,
Fixed a couple panning issues with one of the crash FXs, and really just finished it pretty much. I know a few of you were waiting to see what it turned out like, so here it is! Feedback, of course, still appreciated.
http://lego.zianet.com/tilda140/12-14-08-Untitled.mp3
And of course, this isn't *completely* final but the idea is there. |
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| PDM |
| It sounds good to me, except the fact that it doesn't have a real breakdown. |
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| Evolve140 |
| Agreed. I was thinking full-blown pads and everything... |
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| MrJiveBoJingles |
I like that distorted riff a lot.
You take it out of the track really suddenly, though. Feels a bit jolting.
I feel like this could have some more synth sounds in it complementing the main riff. |
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| Evolve140 |
| Can you give me an example of "taking away"? Is it at the end of the song? |
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