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Three new tracks (some uplifting...some dark)
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| Dingoku |
Haven't put anything out in a while so please check out my three latest tracks at www.myspace.com/kumorijinsei
The titles are as follows:
Love's Just a Word (Have lyrics planned for this one)
Illusion of Absolution
Eye of the Abyss
As I am still a beginner and trying to improve as much as possible, any comments/criticism will be greatly appreciated.
TY
~ Kyle |
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| AudioGuru |
| The kick drum is almost non existent, I do like most of your melodies, arrangment and breakdowns. The tempo is a little fast for my tastes. A lot of the sounds you have in there sound good, but for some reason it doesn't seem like one cohesive song, almost like a Demo of the software synths or something if that makes sense. not to be too picky. keep it up most of the areas that are lacking come with time and practice. |
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| Dingoku |
| Awesome, I'll get to work on it. Thanks for the advice. |
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| professorTHC |
| you have better tone than a lot of stuff ive heard around here, but find your rythm and get to adding rythm to those melodies and make them some cool riffs. |
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