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[Breakbeat] Subtara - Untitled (Can you name it for me ?)
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| Subtle |
Hey, im posting this newest creation of mine.
This baby is in need of a name, so please help me think of any.
Artist: Subtara
Track: Untitled
Style: Breakbeat
Length: 5:40
Bitrate: 320
Link:
http://www.subtleinc.net/subtara_-_untitled_track.mp3
Any comments welcome, and especially a name. |
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| Sinnica Hax |
| The melody towards the middle of the track reminds me of the 80s for some reason along with the funky snare. (This is a good thing, im a sucker for 80s) Name hmm... wow I suck with names, I always spend tons of hours on the name of the tracks I really wish to do something with because names is important to me, nothing pops up in my mind when I hear this :( |
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| Subtle |
Thanks for the comments, I made it as an intro track, thats why its a little empty.. but i guess i can fill it up a little, as i didnt spend too much time on this already. Cheers
| quote: | Originally posted by palm
oh title: break 01 :stongue: |
Thanks, but id rather stick with GOT NO NAME5 instead. :crazy: |
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| BshidoHEAT |
A bit of spicing up like, chopped up vocals some fxs would really do this track some good ;) also I think the sub bass needs to be a bit louder. I can imagine this being mashed up with another track.
I'm usually decent at naming stuff, I'm getting a real kind of 'winter-esqe' vibe from this track, for some unknown reason. If that helps any. |
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| Subtle |
| quote: | Originally posted by BshidoHEAT
A bit of spicing up like, chopped up vocals some fxs would really do this track some good ;) also I think the sub bass needs to be a bit louder. I can imagine this being mashed up with another track.
I'm usually decent at naming stuff, I'm getting a real kind of 'winter-esqe' vibe from this track, for some unknown reason. If that helps any. |
Hey, thanks.. gonna come up with some spicing, as i realise it might be a little empty yeah.
Winter ? Thats actually very good suggestion, i might use that.
Cheers. |
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| cybernetica |
your host is fast :D
kick and snare are well chosen, they punch in the face.
personally the track feels a little empty before the melody comes in, I'd use some more variation in the rythm section, or maybe some FX.
The melody is nice, sounds remotely familiar.. not saying its a ripoff or anything, just reminiscent of something.
I also agree that it needs a bit more warmth in the subrange.
It's definitely a melancholic piece and according to the time in the year "Winter" might be a good title indeed. I'd also throw into the suggestion pot "memories of starlight" .. dunno, maybe a bit cheesy... guess "winter" is better :D |
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| Takkra |
Funky beat right from the start :) Sounds lovely electro'ish
Hmm the usage of those beats AND the 80's synths make it sound a little outdated though. Like it was produced a few years back.
The rythm still is nice and funky which makes up for it :)
Ah bass progression!
..although it's not much it adds so much dimension!
..oops I got caught up so much in listening I forgot to comment the rest of it :) but I guess that says enough!
The track really started to work for me from the moment you introduced the piano, before it didn't do that much except being FUNKAHH:haha:
I'd saaay;
- Retro Sinistro
- Quattro Retro
(or something with maestro) :p |
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| Dlemmon |
| Title "Broken"? I dunno it's the first thing that came to mind |
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