TranceAddict Forums Archive > DJing / Production / Promotion > Music Producers Promotion Looking for some feedback... DJ CloudMac VS Pink Floyd - Empty spaces. View this Thread in Original format djcloudmac It's nowhere near professional level IMO. But i would like some feedback anyway please.. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hLWLIHQz9Rc I should add that this is my first track in ableton... Sh!fty sounds cheezy and generic, sorry djcloudmac quote: Originally posted by Sh!fty sounds cheezy and generic, sorry Fine i can accept that but what makes it sound cheesy and generic? I am looking for some constructive criticism and some advice... :) EddieZilker The hi-hats should evolve before the break. It sounds like there are some timing irregularities that could be tightened up quite a bit during the break. The thunder sound seems out of whack. The mix is very muddy. I like the lead sound, but I think you could do a lot more with it and it ought to be introduced, before the break. Good ideas but this needs a lot of refining. Mr.Mystery Don't mess with Pink Floyd. Prototrance quote: Originally posted by Mr.Mystery Don't mess with Pink Floyd. Agree CLICK TO RETURN TO TOP OF PAGE

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