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Lots of potential! need criticism/judgment
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| professorTHC |
Hopefully this will catch your attention. id like any input you can spare.
so far ive been told i needed to add more riffs and im working on that now =)
comments?
*EDIT*
Feb-19-2009
Ok so ive been getting a lot of compliments from this one. Any further criticism/suggestion would be appreciated. or if you just wanna say the song sucks, thats cool too, likewise if you like it! =)
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| professorTHC |
seriously? not even one comment?
id rather have everyone tell me the song blows than nothing at all. |
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| DaMann |
Well definitly make it longer. When you lower the filter on those electro/acid synths, try to make it to where you don't hear those little whoop sounds, I'm trying to explain as best as I can, but I don't think it works here. Did you use Reason 4?
Pretty Cool
-DaMann |
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| Brownsound |
| seems like things keep changing too much in the song. maybe try keeping the kick and bassline constant for a while and mess with the lead for 8 bars or so. keep everything constant except for one thing at a time unless you're transitioning to another section of the song in the last bar. then the song will be longer cuz then 8 bars could be dedicated to a changing lead then the next 8 could be a changing drum line or something. |
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| lemonlimerush |
could i sing to that track when it's finished, i really enjoyed that
you can check out stuff i'm working on right now
at
www.myspace.com/lemonlimerush |
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| professorTHC |
Excellent thanks for the feed back =)
Im a sympathetic listener so i understand what youre trying to say and ill definitely apply that, plus the extension idea. |
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| music2dance2 |
Nice synth work here and the vocoded vox to. SO good ideas, if you could add a main lead vocal you could have a killer track here.
That reminds me I have a soundcloud account I really should use it much better for posting songs. |
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| professorTHC |
Sorry if this is over-done, but, bump for edit!
leave ONE comment and never come back if that is the least you can do! |
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| EddieZilker |
Nice work.
I'm liking this, so far. The drums seem a little sparse. It could also use a few Sound FX to punctuate the changes.
The bass-line sounded a little thin. I usually use a couple of different sounds - one for low-end and one for a buzz.
Overall, the music is flawless.
I'm looking forward to upcoming/finished versions. |
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| lemonlimerush |
| i'm not a big fan of the treble bass, but that's about it in your tracks. |
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| professorTHC |
thanks for the feed back, i can pretty much understand every one of the suggestions you posted. and while i see that you are correct i dont know if it is worth my time to spend more time on this song. simply because you are hearing my learning process. i only started very recently using FL studios so you can really hear the production skill progress slowly while the style stays relatively similar with polyrhytmic melodies and all that good stuff.
I really appreciate the compliments too, its always nice to get positive feedback. gives me drive to achieve my potential. |
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