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Looking for feedback on my first song
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| TWD |
So I've been playing around with all sorts of software for a few months now, but I finally decided to actually sit down and make a full track. I would really love to hear any kind of feedback people have on it. Just be kind please :)
Also sorry in advance if this is the wrong forum for this. If so please direct me to where I should go.
You can download my song here:
http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=...04e75f6e8ebb871 |
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| ReclusNdangrmnt |
| The noise rhythm-hiss seems a little out of place, because it seems lo-fi in comparison to the synthwork...But I like where it's going! Nice and brooding. |
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| DJ RANN |
Really like your track - a lot. The synth programming and layering is great. Wher I find the track falls down is the percussion. The kick doesn't sound right, the rhythm of the hiss does not fit in with the tracks percussive arrangement. I like the overall element programming but the percussion needs to be more complimentary of the synths, and provide the drive they are begging for.
Just my 2c, but good work - look forward to hearing it again. |
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| TWD |
| quote: | Originally posted by DJ RANN
Really like your track - a lot. The synth programming and layering is great. Wher I find the track falls down is the percussion. The kick doesn't sound right, the rhythm of the hiss does not fit in with the tracks percussive arrangement. I like the overall element programming but the percussion needs to be more complimentary of the synths, and provide the drive they are begging for.
Just my 2c, but good work - look forward to hearing it again. |
Thanks is is very helpful and encouraging. I knew that percussion was the weak point. I only have one loop for the highs, one for the hiss, and then the kick. So I hadn't put a lot lot of time into it. Plus I haven't done anything to my samples. Before I was just planning on tweaking things a bit, and adding some more variation. Now I think I should go back to square one and learn how to modify the samples to get the sound I need. Maybe even completely rework the beat to give it more drive/kick. |
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| DJ RANN |
| quote: | Originally posted by TWD
Thanks is is very helpful and encouraging. I knew that percussion was the weak point. I only have one loop for the highs, one for the hiss, and then the kick. So I hadn't put a lot lot of time into it. Plus I haven't done anything to my samples. Before I was just planning on tweaking things a bit, and adding some more variation. Now I think I should go back to square one and learn how to modify the samples to get the sound I need. Maybe even completely rework the beat to give it more drive/kick. |
I would definitely do that - the track as it stands just needs better drive and percussion. Listen to some Jaytech tracks - the way he builds percussion with heavily melodic synths parts would suit this track a lot. IMO, I would start the perc from scratch with a new punchy kick and give the the rest of the perc a prog style rhythm....but that's just me :D |
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| DJ Robby Rox |
I'm not going to do any sort of in-depth review as its your first track.
Its a great track for you first but you need to soften up the noise a bit. The hissing sounds too abrasive, maybe hi pass it a bit more, possibly phase it a tad and if its on a synth open the release just a bit.
It will give it a softer feel which would suit the track better. |
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