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My latest house tune. Candela
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Papus
Tell me what you think of it. Any kind of criticism is welcomed.


http://www.zshare.net/audio/56979530839c7508/
Papus
bumps
VictorJukov
link didn't work for me guy.
Papus
It works fine for me.
VictorJukov
quote:
Originally posted by Papus
It works fine for me.


could be my internet.
daeus
Its got potential to be a decent prog house track but some of the sounds are too weak.

The triangle wave bass at the start is too weak,use a better patch, the track also needs a deeper bassline in between all the other notes to come in after a minute or so, this will up the tracks pace and add energy.

The squeeky synth near the end needs to die and be replaced with big wide lead synth patch.

PM me once you've tweaked it so I can hear the diff!
esha
ok the first 30 sec for me needs more form, after that the bass sound good but is to sound synth for me, the sounds are high pitched, the track is very chill and i like it, can go to my bed and just relax
Papus
Thanks for the help guys. I'm gonna tweak it a bit and let you guys know.
Fruitless
I liked the first thirty seconds actually :)
and like how everything is put together
I do believe your lead should be more powerful though
I really like the atmosphere but it tends to loop quite a bit
breakdowns pretty solid but i think the lead could maybe change up a bit
the only other thing was that if you want the track to be mixed I'm not sure if it holds its energy for too long before the outro, have you tried to mix in in/out with other tracks?

overall enjoyed the ride :)

cheers mate
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