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| flow1988 |
hi guys it was nice of you guys to critque my first track. although i think i will not go back to it til a long time, i've moved on and begun to practice techniques. I am no master but i think this I'm pretty good at where i am at.
without further ado here is my track below
http://www.zshare.net/audio/57865091d9265d6c/
it's 3:41 minutes long or short which ever you prefer.
no genre really as no music inspired me to make this...
it was all out of frustration one day when i came home and mother bitched at me. |
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| EddieZilker |
Wow!
This is pretty cool. It's chill and shows a lot of progression from your first song.
Your last track wasn't this polished. This one has a very simple structure but is finessed really well. I found myself drawn into it.
It's not EDM, per se, but...
well...
...it is what it is. :D
I like the title, too. Take care and nice job. I'm adding it to my collection. |
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| flow1988 |
| thanks for the feedback! :) I'll be sure to post all my productions and hopefully you can tell me how i am through out the whole way... sO i can get an idea of where I am at =] |
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| DJ Damerchi |
that 1/8 note ticker thing doesnt do the track any justice.
I think a few more perc lines would be sweet.
there is some cool things you got going on, at 2:01 onwards i was really drawn in.
much potential |
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