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J.D.C - Far Away (FIRST TRACK THAT IVE PUT ON TA... FEEDBACK PLEASE ? ?)
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| johncannons1 |
This is the first track ive uploaded to TA and if possible when u listen i would love to hear feedback from you..
made it with Reason and Logic...
i have put a multiband compressor on the master channel.. to give it better dynamics..
but in saying that i dont really now to master or use compressors that well lol . . .
so please all feedback is welcome!!!
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| 9Vibes |
Not bad for a First song :)
The tune is fine , but I reckon the lead pattern can be better.
The sudden high 'bass' sound at 2:47 seems to be too overpowered , but , how do you create that bass?
At the breakdown , I would actually remove that side chain , to give it a soomther flow , So that it sounds more peaceful.
Great song! |
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| johncannons1 |
| quote: | Originally posted by 9Vibes
Not bad for a First song :)
The tune is fine , but I reckon the lead pattern can be better.
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by lead do u mean the appegiatored bit ?
by better you mean change up the notes or the progression something similar ?
| quote: | Originally posted by 9Vibes
The sudden high 'bass' sound at 2:47 seems to be too overpowered , but , how do you create that bass?
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which bass bit im a little bit confused do u mean the bit that is at the end of every bar in the middle of the song...
the one with lots of reverb ?
or the bassline ?
thanks for the feedback too...
any more feedback from anyone would be helpful too...
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| 9Vibes |
| quote: | Originally posted by johncannons1
by lead do u mean the appegiatored bit ?
by better you mean change up the notes or the progression something similar ?
which bass bit im a little bit confused do u mean the bit that is at the end of every bar in the middle of the song...
the one with lots of reverb ?
or the bassline ?
thanks for the feedback too...
any more feedback from anyone would be helpful too...
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By the lead , yep I mean the Saw arps , I think you could their notes and their progression.
And yep its that bass , the one with lots of reverb and delay on it and comes at the end of every bar.
It is a bit overpowered , but how do you made it? |
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| johncannons1 |
| umm it's a preset on logics es2 synth.. And like u said some delay.. And the I put a platinum reverb plugin on it cranked the room size up to 200 metres put some pre delay and reverb time about 14.5 secs and put the wet up to around 40 I think.. I'm on the bus to work so I can't see what plugin it is but I think it's trance lead or trance poly.. |
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| johncannons1 |
downloaded 23 times... lol
and one person has given me feedback...
come on guys im sure that you must have something lol |
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| johncannons1 |
| Nothing lol? |
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| delusional |
| uh, make house music ! |
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| EddieZilker |
| This really isn't bad but I thought the hi-hats could use some more depth. The kick also sounds a little anemic. I love the other parts, however. |
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| johncannons1 |
| quote: | Originally posted by delusional
uh, make house music ! |
haha why do you say that ? |
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| johncannons1 |
thanks for the feedback guys..
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