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feedback on new tune(trance)
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| Dj_MadirozE |
myspace.com/djmadiroze
feedback please
(1st track in player-brighter than the future)
cheers
mike |
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| glittergirl |
can you post a link here, for those of us who are too lazy to go to your myspace?
would then <3 to check it out :D |
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| glittergirl |
| haha nevermind i'm there. i'm listening. |
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| DJ Eco |
The beat's definitely cool, but melody goes a little too all over the place... I think what you do with the melody in the later minutes is definitely awesome, but it takes too long to get there... I would imagine the listener would either get too tired or confused to go past the first few minutes to get to the good part... I would either keep the first half pretty low-key, with a few hints of what's to come. Around 2-3 minute mark you start bringing in that weird (in a good way) melody in and a minute later you start introducing those melody variations that you now have closer to the end...
I listened to it yesterday though, so what I'm saying now is based on memory haha.. I'll check it again later.. |
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| Dj_MadirozE |
| quote: | Originally posted by glittergirl
haha nevermind i'm there. i'm listening. |
thanks for listening |
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| Dj_MadirozE |
| quote: | Originally posted by DJ Eco
The beat's definitely cool, but melody goes a little too all over the place... I think what you do with the melody in the later minutes is definitely awesome, but it takes too long to get there... I would imagine the listener would either get too tired or confused to go past the first few minutes to get to the good part... I would either keep the first half pretty low-key, with a few hints of what's to come. Around 2-3 minute mark you start bringing in that weird (in a good way) melody in and a minute later you start introducing those melody variations that you now have closer to the end...
I listened to it yesterday though, so what I'm saying now is based on memory haha.. I'll check it again later.. |
hey marcello
as usual thank you for ur feedback,u give good advice and can back it up with quality choons,btw took a trip down memory lane and listened 2 ecos abstract funk remix ...good stuff haaa
seriously man u got some quality toonage ..ive been listening to edm for 13 years and djing/studying for 10...paradise now has always been on the top ...and tonight is forever is a great tune for young and up and coming artists to learn from |
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