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Tobaddiction - Broken Nails (Not Really Mastered Version) >> Progressive House
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| tobaddiction |
Hello Guys!
I want to ask you for a feedback of my first self-made track called "Broken Nails". I do not want to tell you any details but leave you alone with it, i will say something after some feedbacks. I produce since half a year spending much time in it.
Software:
Ableton Live 7, Massive, DJ-Headphones as ..... wtf does "abhöre" means in english??? :D the thing the sound comes out ^^
thanks in advance
cheers
cheers |
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| tobaddiction |
| edit: i am sorry but i did not know that you have to be registrated to hear the song. i will upload it to another plattform... |
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| flow1988 |
| the first body after the swoosh was kind of long. a little too long. it had no direction. but during the second body with the other elements it starts getting kind of good. maybe u need to re arrange it? |
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| tobaddiction |
thank you for your feedback.
the break lasts for 1:30, maybe that would be fine if i would find some "direction" as you said, new elements fitting in the break... i have to try.. thank you
but first i need other feedbacks :p |
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| tobaddiction |
| ehmm, no i don't have any idea |
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| EddieZilker |
Click the share button, above the file, then highlight the script, copy that onto your clip-board, and paste it, here.
Abhor means to hate, btw. I do not abhor your song but I do think it could be developed a lot further.
It's a pleasant listen, however and the mix is well balanced. |
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| tobaddiction |
thank you!
i will rearrange this track this weekend....
cheers |
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