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Ahava- Aether (uplifting melodic trance)
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blorgpulkfplork
It's the top track on the page...please critique if you listen

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/def...m?bandID=815435
EddieZilker
Confusing. On one hand, the song's structure and the way it builds is impressive. There are some seriously nice harmonic progressions going on. On the other, it lacks soul - sounds as though it were made using a lot of algorithms and cliche' conventions and not a lot of... well, er, soul.

A lot of the element sounds are tinny/thin sounding, and don't do any favors to the mix, which felt over-powered, like it was just in my face, without very little subtlety of expression. There was also a clutter to the arrangement that contributed to the mix's "wall of sound". It doesn't breath - it just is.

All of the parts seem to be competing for space rather than contributing to one another.
blorgpulkfplork
interesting comments--I've updated it a bit / anyone else?
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