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Ahava- Aether (uplifting melodic trance)
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| KamilB |
It's not bad, but it's getting pretty boring in the middle. Personally I don't feel main melody.
Mastering is decent, main part is a little dull. |
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| mfitterer1 |
I listened to it last night, I agree with the above post, the melody was supposed to drive the song from what it sounded like, but it didn't really do so. Also I think the main break ended oddly, it didn't sound ideal to me bringing all of the elements in at once after the break, you missed out on alot of tension you could have built by bringing them in slowly before the break ended and THEN having them all play together. The eq and mastering sounded fine to me though. Your drums sounded a bit thin and you may want to add a few more different loops in there as well to help push the song through.
Not a bad start at all though. |
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| RichieV |
| should be a little more specific on what you want critiqued. Otherwise you might want to use the forum everyone else uses. |
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| orTofønChiLd |
| Splendid track, i can tell its gonna be in the next asot. |
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| mfitterer1 |
| quote: | Originally posted by orTofønChiLd
Splendid track, i can tell its gonna be in the next asot. |
You didn't have to insult him that badly!:D |
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