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Demo for armada 5 out of 8 minutes sample
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| justme78783 |
Ok here is a biger sample ... the version is quite amateur but i really believe that it can give you a taste ... !
The structure will remain as it is , the melody will improve quite a bit and the various ideas will connect of course in a profesional way ... !
So bsically i am interested to see if you like the ideas that i ve laid in this track thank you ! Any feedback would be much apreciated .
Link
http://www.filefactory.com/file/ag0c345/n/VanDE_mp3 |
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| adi_hanson |
listening in........
the first thing that hits me its the bass that starts at 38 secs comes in , in an odd place , maybe its the synth over the top that makes me expect something else.
tbh the first lead sounds like a dj mixing in a new track.personally i would drop the kick and then bring it back in.
tune is good , no probs there
you need to sort out the nexus at 3.26 , i dunno add some effects to it , change it , make it more interesting , like phaser it or something
mmmmmmmmmmm like the piano bit.Maybe to much reverb on it tho.
well , thats my feedback , hope i dont sound to bad :D
hope it goes well for ya. |
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| justme78783 |
| quote: | Originally posted by adi_hanson
listening in........
the first thing that hits me its the bass that starts at 38 secs comes in , in an odd place , maybe its the synth over the top that makes me expect something else.
tbh the first lead sounds like a dj mixing in a new track.personally i would drop the kick and then bring it back in.
tune is good , no probs there
you need to sort out the nexus at 3.26 , i dunno add some effects to it , change it , make it more interesting , like phaser it or something
mmmmmmmmmmm like the piano bit.Maybe to much reverb on it tho.
well , thats my feedback , hope i dont sound to bad :D
hope it goes well for ya. |
thanx buddy , your feedback is quite useful , when i ll start the profesional version all the 'minor' problems will be fixed , i realy believe that this belongs to the technical aspect of the track ! Tae care ;) ! |
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| flow1988 |
| i cant listen to it for some reason... says link expired o.O |
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