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Cryophonik ft Avonlea Mantague - Telescope (Urlich Remix)
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| trisk |
This is my first attempt at making a serious remix of any sort.
I'm not sure if it's worthy of a release and I'm not completely finished yet, but I thought I should get some feedback on it so far.
Not too bad for a high school student that's so busy he shouldn't be working on this?
updated May 30th: [[ LINK REMOVED ]]
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| msz |
| your link is down but you probably already know that. Who cares what your age is, theres been 16year olds signed to big lables it makes you feel better |
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| trisk |
| The link worked before, now the song became suddenly unshareable after i made it shareable. Its fixed now, hope that doesn't happen again. I stuck in a speedyshare link in the original post in case it screws up again. |
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| msz |
is there even a kickdrum in this track(other than the intro)? if there is you should stick some basic fundamentals such as a perceptive kick/percussion pattern and work your entire track around that.
bass is somewhat cool(maybe some more eq towards low end), i like your synth work its definetly the strong point. pretty original ideas, some of which were pretty well executed. I think it works as a pop remix |
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| trisk |
Thanks for the comments!
You're right, the mix on the kick was much too low. I've fixed that, as well as EQ'd the bass, added a couple reversed cymbals, and fixed the mix a little.
Not sure if it's my tired ears, but I think that the low end sounds slightly muffled now :S |
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| msz |
listening to the update to try my best to help you as much as i can.
this mix is an improvement for sure, the bass sounds better.
but... you have to keep the total mix in account, not just an element, dont compromise the kick for the bass, you need to work out that low/low mid end. i would also apply sidechain on the bass, hope this helps. |
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