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need some feedback :)
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| Existo22 |
How was this made?
Well here is my feedback:
Its not bad.
The melody gets kinda repetative plus i need more to keep me listening. Not bad but is it strong enough to stand on its own?
I suggest you further develop that musical idea into something a bit more interesting. ;)
The sound is a tad bit too bright for my taste but thats a matter of preferance. Too much high end, too much tremble for me.
The aranging could use a bit of work as well.
It all comes down to this:
As a backing filler track it would be fine but its the type of track that would go unoticed in a club imo.
Ask your self is this track catchy enough to grab peoples attention and make them want to download it? |
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| johncannons1 |
I'm only new on here but for it's worth I think it has a lot of potential
I like the main riff but it does get boring I think you could
Develop it more change up the notes and the progression at
The breakdown play a new hek riff for a bar or two then back to the original
Riff then once the song is back in full swing smash the new
Hektic riff ( I was singing it all in my head lol)
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| djandymac |
| cheers for the feedback guys, the melody is acutally annoying myself a little now lol. gonna work on it more and see what happens. cheers again |
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| johncannons1 |
| quote: | Originally posted by djandymac
cheers for the feedback buddy, the melody is acutally annoying myself a little now lol. gonna work on it more and see what happens. cheers again |
No worries.. |
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| djandymac |
| ok, so ive updated the link on this, again, any feedback would be spot on :) |
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| msz |
| sounds pretty good to me. maybe a little too bright in the top end for my speakers, but its probably just my speakers. i like the bass, pretty cool progression. nice work, feel free to check my tune in promo section. keep well. |
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| djandymac |
| cheers buddy, will do :) |
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| Sonic_c |
| I like it andy what scales it in? I quite like the use of intervals and trance is a repetitive music so dont get to caught up in that. Like the breakdown effect. Do i detect a key change for 2 bars before the drop? or just a really wide voiced chord or something? |
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| djandymac |
| now then sonic, nah no key changes at all. the whole track is in the key of a sharp major. thank you very much for listening. :) |
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