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Cryophonik ft.Avonlea Montague -Telescope (Beamrider Remix)
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| beamrider |
no feedback yet?
I know that there are pretty good remixes for this song out there but I think mine deserves a listen too.
:D
cheers |
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| EddieZilker |
Hard panned, whispered "Search for you" sounds a little creepy - stalker creepy. Just my impression and if that's what you're going for...
I like the bass-line - it could come up a little.
I like the minimal feel to this.
The mix is nice and clean but could, possibly, be a little brighter.
Lead coming in after the break sounds a little chintzy and there are some tracks that aren't in key.
Drums and percussion could be progressed a little beyond their current state. |
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| mfitterer1 |
| I also dont like the creepy searching for you. As a background vocal it is far too different from the main vocals. Just seems strange to me. |
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| trisk |
The whisper is a bit creepy, it's cool, but I don't think it goes that great with the original vocals.
The bass could definitely be brought up.
I agree that it could be brighter as well.
I don't really like the piano during the breakdown, not sure if you combined it with it with a piano, or it's synthesized altogether, but I'm just not digging the sound.
It has some great ideas though, it could be fixed up into a really cool track! |
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| Beatflux |
| quote: | Originally posted by EddieZilker
Hard panned, whispered "Search for you" sounds a little creepy - stalker creepy. Just my impression and if that's what you're going for...
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LOL You are right. It sounds like someone is whispering right in your ear. |
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