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Aleksander Van Hellsing feat. USP - Io (BEST TRACK YET!)
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| Apollos Prelude |
Myspace.com/aleksandervh
or here - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zYG7I-8ZU-A&fmt=18
my best track yet....please tell me what you think |
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| Apollos Prelude |
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any feedback plz? |
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| EddieZilker |
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Nice intro. Cool overtones create dissonance with that slightly distorted sound. Might want to pull it back, but just a skosh, as it felt over-used at times.
Excellent Kick Sound.
Love the TB303 lead sound.
Introduction and build of harmonic components brilliantly subtle and executed.
Mix becomes a little cluttered, however, and you might think about pulling some parts back. Don't ditch them. Just ride the fader up on their intro and pull it back down when other parts start coming in and be subtle about it <---- Just suggestion.
Cool break - inspires a sense of mystery. After a while it got to be a little repetetive and you might think about adding a part to fill it out.
Rebuild not very fluid.
Nice use of percussive attack rolls. Wanted more out of the ending.
I think it has a huge amount of potential and, as it is now, still pretty much rocks. Keep working on it, though, because it could be huge.
Nice work. |
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| Apollos Prelude |
| quote: | Originally posted by EddieZilker
Your link isn't active.
Nice intro. Cool overtones create dissonance with that slightly distorted sound. Might want to pull it back, but just a skosh, as it felt over-used at times.
Excellent Kick Sound.
Love the TB303 lead sound.
Introduction and build of harmonic components brilliantly subtle and executed.
Mix becomes a little cluttered, however, and you might think about pulling some parts back. Don't ditch them. Just ride the fader up on their intro and pull it back down when other parts start coming in and be subtle about it <---- Just suggestion.
Cool break - inspires a sense of mystery. After a while it got to be a little repetetive and you might think about adding a part to fill it out.
Rebuild not very fluid.
Nice use of percussive attack rolls. Wanted more out of the ending.
I think it has a huge amount of potential and, as it is now, still pretty much rocks. Keep working on it, though, because it could be huge.
Nice work. |
thank you man!!! i will continue work on it!
anyone else have any advice? |
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| djdarroo |
| I like it reminds me of when i was younger and i used to sneak into my uncles apartment to listen to some goa trance :D back in 1997 what did u use for those arps |
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| Apollos Prelude |
| quote: | Originally posted by djdarroo
I like it reminds me of when i was younger and i used to sneak into my uncles apartment to listen to some goa trance :D back in 1997 what did u use for those arps |
i used Z3ta :) |
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