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Link to unfinished song I need help with :)
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| Sonic_c |
| Was trying to post a sample of something but it just posts the html. Is it blocked in here? |
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| palm |
| it works in the promotion forum but not sure in this sub. didnt look like it from your thread. |
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| Sonic_c |
Ok well its here if anyone has the time
http://soundcloud.com/richard-wilson/im-lost-01
I just cant turn hat I have here into the finished project. Usually I can hear it but although I'm diggin the track I cant hear where its got to go. Frustrating me. Thanks |
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| palm |
| it defintly needs more that 1 hihat 1 clap and 1 kick when it comes to drums. it also needs work on the transition beacuse right now it sound really generic. not sure I cant help anymore as this genre isnt really my cup of tea. |
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| Sonic_c |
| See thats what I was feeling generic I dont want generic. Thanks man maybe trash |
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| gr8ape |
sucks
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lol but seriously same thing as palm says
you could elaborate the song easily, its a nice base but theres work to do |
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| Sonic_c |
| quote: | Originally posted by gr8ape
sucks
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Your right just woke up and listened again not even feeling it anymore. |
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| Lucidity |
| First half is ok, then second half goes awry. I thought it was ok at first then changed what I had expected. Now, Seasons of Sun, I like alot more. Needs sound work, but, I like the song. |
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| kitphillips |
| I can think of so many places you could take that chord progression. But then you take it somewhere so boring... You've got the ASOT trance structure down right at least. |
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| Sonic_c |
| Thanks guys but Im stripping it right back. They are boring chords and im not about that! I'm just stuck for insiration after my last song but full of enthusiasm bad combo. Thanks for feeds |
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| gr8ape |
| quote: | Originally posted by Sonic_c
Thanks guys but Im stripping it right back. They are boring chords and im not about that! I'm just stuck for insiration after my last song but full of enthusiasm bad combo. Thanks for feeds |
nothing wrong with starting a new project and recycling your old sounds and beats |
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| Sonic_c |
| Thats what im gonna do I like the kick and fx so im gonna start there and work back up. I got to go college now and studio engineer for a Death Metal band - whats worse they are all 15 and 16 so its all the screaming at society crap. Only redeeming thing Im in control room so I can mute them :) |
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