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Jamesh by Calvin Karass (8:40) 320bps Uplifting Grunge
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| Nemesis44 |
Got this track that I knocked together in a few hours, figured I would share it with you.
I have left some bum notes in just to stop the pirates but let me know if you like it and I will let you have an 'unbummed' copy. he he.
Calvin Karass - Jamesh
Clicky Here!
all feedback appreciated.
All the best
Nem |
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| Tarpex |
I did listen to it yesterday, but forgot to drop a comment, silly me.
I like the track, nice quality, though that reverbed sine is waaaaay to loud, it's cramping out of the speakers like crazy.
Nice creativity with compression on the lead there, if it was me, I'd sidechain the supersaw pad against the lead in the climax a little, nice work with mixing otherwise :)
The lead itself sounds it could be better presented, a center + L&R bounce would do add a new dimension to it, you're missing one sound that really stands out.
Thumbs up for sure, good piece, just get that sine in line with the rest of the track :) |
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| Nemesis44 |
Hey man,
Thanks for listening and I will definitely take on board what you are saying.
Always great to get a neutral set of ears to listen.
Will make sure I check out your tracks. :)
Thanks again
Nem |
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| Nemesis44 |
C'mon, 63 views and only one comment... what is this place coming to?
Cheers
Nem |
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| Owsey2008 |
Listening in, I think at the beggining it would be nice to hear more percs instead of the kick only. Those synths that come in are very cool, love the plucked one. good use of FX too.
The Synthwork is very cool coming into the breakdown, interesting melody you have going on here. This is the sort of stuff I love...
Sounds great when it kicks in. From then on I don't really have anything to comment on.
Nice one! Owen. |
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| novastorm |
greetings Nem!
Good to hear more material from you - Very cool track here! It struck me as something J00F would love, with those awesome acidic stabs in the buildup. great kick and percussion, very driving, LOOOVE the crush FX you've used leading into the breakdown, sounds really polished and adds texture. The chord progression you've in the main sequence works nicely too, uplifting in a sophisticated way. The only thing which sounded out of place for me was the supersaw pad - sounded too much like a preset, perhaps lower the res on it, add some wetness? It sounded a little stark and would fit better with the vibe of this track if it wasn't so bright and obvious -- a darker, more submersive pad wrapping itself insidiously around the brighter elements of this track would be more effective imo :) |
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| djtomo |
Pretty nice Nem! This production really reminds me of Ferry Corsten's /Armin Van Buurens earlier work. Keep work'n at it.
Two thumbs up and a squint from me,
-Tom |
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| Nemesis44 |
Thanks for listening guys, well definitely take those comments on board.
Well make sure I check out stuff from you guys.
all the best
Nem |
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| BshidoHEAT |
Great production ;) I have nothing really to add to this.
I'd love to play this track, if you don't mind :) |
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