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Cryophonik feat. Avonlea Montague - Telescope (Tomo's Mixes)
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djtomo
Hiyah guys, just finished my 2nd remix submission of Cryo's amazing track (Telescope). This is actually my first attempt at Trance and was a bit challenging as I had to warp and re-arrange the vocals to my liking. Overall it was SUPER fun to make overnight, and I thank Cryophonik and Avonlea Montague for putting the remix pack up and Wiley from Olympik records for hosting the contest. Super cool of you guys. Anyways, I hope you guys like the track, just press play. The first track is the trance version, the second is the progressive one. Don't mind the other tracks unless you're really bored. lol =)


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Any comments, suggestions, or feedback in general would be highly appreciated.

Thanks for listening,
-Tom
BshidoHEAT
This was made overnight? Pretty decent for something that was made over night.

It's decent, but not totally great. I think the piano melody gets a bit loud, the side chain around 4:14 gets a bit loud as well takes away from the vocals. I think you can use more elements in it if you spend more time with the track ;).
mfitterer1
I like the vibe and like what you did with the lyrics, just needs some cleaning up and polishing and I think it'd be quite solid! I however liked the heavy sidechaining towards the end, gave a climax sort of feel like the song was about to peak. Just my 2 cents.
djtomo
Thanks for the comments guys, keep them coming. I wanted my remix to put the vocals and the piano melody in the spot light to do them justice. All I did was throw on bells and whistles and polished it a bit. Overall I'm quite happy with the remix but I am open to suggestions.
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