im not really into this type of music, but i think that its a little repetitive in a few areas add some more variation perhaps. But then if your leaning towards a more progressive track then the length of it may be ok. cant comment on quality really as using a pair of headphones i got from a plane flight.
suneel
hi sako487
well it sounds ok till the passage. But after the passage it could do well with some more elements. let me bullet it
- add another trancy tune in the passage
- then use this trancy tune to play with the current tune you have.
- imo that tune you have, the preset is not suited to be played till the end. so try to replace it with a saw preset, but not too bright.
- the keys you have for your tune are fine. they are trancy, so its all about choosing the right preset and using another synth to play cetain notes from that base key, if you know what i mean
- lastly about the kick and drums, dont worry too much about compression and bs. focus more on musical structure. cause if a label like it the sound engineer will ultimately set the compression on the mix or ask you to edit certain changes. however do note bass+bassline+drums you do first in a trance song. easier that way
have fun! ;)
sako487
thanks dude ill work on all that
suneel
sako whats is the bbcode here to embed soundcloud player?
sako487
go to the soundcloud page of your song, should be on top of the track called "share". click on it and copy the embed, is that what your saying?