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Helion - Pure Illusion (Ambient Trance)
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helion
This is a new track that I just finished up:
http://soundcloud.com/helion/pure-illusion

Any feedback, comments, or suggestions to help me improve would be much appreciated.

Thank you!
Suli Salerno
Idea is good, need work balancing out your different tracks... just seems what I wanted to hear was beoing drown out by things that should have been in the background
suneel
needs lots of work bro

-cut out low bass in the beginning. add a low cut filter to remove low freq below 60hz

-kick is outdated. sound like early 90s kick

-the melodic synths with high octave needs to have lower volume

- the passage in the beginning it is too silent, till the part where the audio kicks in.

-you need to blend your elements together. i think you need to learn a bit more on eqing. each and evey instrument on your track must be equed.
also their gains must be adjusted accordingly.


i think your new to music making, so dont be mad with these comments. work hard on eq + reverb. dont worry let the creative process continue! :)
helion
Thanks to both of you guys for your comments - much appreciated!

Suneel - no worries :) I did not take it wrong, I am new, and I appreciate the constructive feedback.
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