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Generation Sunset (feedback needed)
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| nozio |
Hi everyone.
I produced my first trance track using Logic Pro 9 and a synthesizer. I've been hammering a couple of days on it and i must say that i think it worked out pretty well.
I would like to know your opinion on this track so i can improve my work. :)
Thanks!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ty1twq4AUso |
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| suneel |
congrads on your first track. its not too bad for a first attempt. here are my opinions
-your kick is too weak. choose a better sample
-you need a bassline for your track. its not there
-try to add some variation to the pad. you only using one pattern over and over again. in music we need to shift the pitch, frequency and patterns to keep song interesting.
dont worry. these things take time, 4-5years is normal to understand if you dont have prior music training. you dont learn everything in one shot, so keep working. :)
btw whats the name of the synthesizer you are using? |
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| nozio |
Tanks for the feedback!
I'm using an (old) GEM WS1 keyboard. Since the thing is from the 90's, i only use it as a MIDI-input. |
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