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| Watts |
I couldn't find a thread like this, and I thought it might be a good idea to start one. Your works in progress might be a small loop or a song almost near completion (but not complete enough to go into the promotion forum).
The only catch is you must say something constructive about the project above you. I think this is a problem in the promotion forum because people want comments on their own work, but don't really take the time to comment on others' (I am guilty of this).
I'll start:
I don't make trance, but for some reason I thought I would try today.
http://peregrin.jmu.edu/~watkindj/w..._trance_1_4.mp3 |
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| johncannons1 |
when the hi hat comes in at one minute i would take the reverb off it.
i think thats whats doing it im not a fan of the verb.
i would cut more lows and raise the highs of the snare thats used to build up into the breakdown.. it sounds kind of conflicting.
and some of the other sounds used conflict. as a recent member explained to me when you hear this just goto the EQ tutorial and give it some eq it worked for me :D
to be honest i dont like the computery sound of the main riff thats playing through the whole song.
it makes it sound to computer-gamey.
and i think that you need to develop the melody more IMO
but thats just me as i like listening to uplifting trance with massive melodies and all that :D
so all up i would, at the breakdown develop it more and make it more HEK
lol
and some more trancier elements more strings/ pads/ sawy leads. |
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| sako487 |
sounds like a great idea, heres mine
i know everything is kinda everywhere but i just started on this, i have yet to EQ
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