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| TranceLover007 |
No problem, it will take me some time to get all of this ready for you.
I will send you privet PS with location.
Can't wait to listen this chillout version, man.
Cheers |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by MrJiveBoJingles
I'd really like to make a chillout / downtempo version of this tune, if TranceLover007 wouldn't mind sending me some remix parts. |
Check your inbox :) |
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| MrJiveBoJingles |
| Thanks, I got the zip file. |
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| jorge_valzan |
| and your name is...? i would like to use this on my sets and give you the credit of the tune of course... should i say "trancelover" haha or...? |
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| tehlord |
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOVE this track :eyespop:
I missed it first time round, it was just before I started using these forums.
Melodically it's pretty much spot! The chords at the beginning are gorgeous and could be used/heard more throughout the track as they get lost a bit. The main pluck sound is begging for a bit more reverb and a simple tempo syned ping pong delay probably set to 1/4 notes with a medium feedback and medium-low mix level. In fact thinking about it you could buss the delay and send that out for more reverb treatment than the pluck itself! Oh the possibilities with this wonderful tune!
Those are all just ideas that I hear and aren't critical in any way.
The only thing that does strike me is that the kick is wrong, at least to my ears. You need much less of an attack, or click with the kick in this track as it's not having to fight with anything. In fact one oh those 80s Linn kicks would be awesome.
Wonderful work. |
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| sako487 |
Listening in
- Well, since i really hate arps, I'd say the intro is not for me
- The bass that comes in really drives the track, and the melody also, its exellent
- Maybe try some different samples for the kick, I ain't digging this one.
- The pads are really good, the reverse cymbal is too loud(and maybe put a reverb on it)
- The bell thing that comes in is a little too awkward for me but the rest is fine
- When it goes to the second breakdown its really nice, but maybe change the snare to have a little bit more on the high end.
- Change the BPM def, its too slow.
All that was just my opinion. Overall I think the song is ing awsome, really nice melodies you god
good job |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by jorge_valzan
and your name is...? i would like to use this on my sets and give you the credit of the tune of course... should i say "trancelover" haha or...? |
Thanks man, this is really cool. I guess you can call me DariusX
Keep the music rolling man. |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by tehlord
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOVE this track :eyespop:
I missed it first time round, it was just before I started using these forums.
Melodically it's pretty much spot! The chords at the beginning are gorgeous and could be used/heard more throughout the track as they get lost a bit. The main pluck sound is begging for a bit more reverb and a simple tempo syned ping pong delay probably set to 1/4 notes with a medium feedback and medium-low mix level. In fact thinking about it you could buss the delay and send that out for more reverb treatment than the pluck itself! Oh the possibilities with this wonderful tune!
Those are all just ideas that I hear and aren't critical in any way.
The only thing that does strike me is that the kick is wrong, at least to my ears. You need much less of an attack, or click with the kick in this track as it's not having to fight with anything. In fact one oh those 80s Linn kicks would be awesome.
Wonderful work. |
As always, thanks man, this is cool that you spend some time going through another people posts and review there work.
When I get to the point of taking on remixing this track, I will definitely consider your advice.
Cheers. |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by sako487
Listening in
- Well, since i really hate arps, I'd say the intro is not for me
- The bass that comes in really drives the track, and the melody also, its exellent
- Maybe try some different samples for the kick, I ain't digging this one.
- The pads are really good, the reverse cymbal is too loud(and maybe put a reverb on it)
- The bell thing that comes in is a little too awkward for me but the rest is fine
- When it goes to the second breakdown its really nice, but maybe change the snare to have a little bit more on the high end.
- Change the BPM def, its too slow.
All that was just my opinion. Overall I think the song is ing awsome, really nice melodies you god
good job |
Thanks for you time and I really appreciate you different opinion.
You are not the first person who said that this kick doesn't fit in this track, so I'm really considering changing this for something different. I'm really digging this comment: | quote: | All that was just my opinion. Overall I think the song is ing awsome, really nice melodies you god
good job |
Keep up those comment comming man. |
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| craigb1 |
| Hi trancelover i had a listen in some spare time last night, and ive got to say i really like it. If im too be completely honest the first 15 - 20 seconds i listened, i didnt no whether it would be my thing, but as many have mentioned the whole track just gels so well together, the chord progression is fantastic, a progression that does not get boring to the ear, so well done for that mate! I only listened once so i could not be critical of anything really, but on that listen alone, your onto a winner, keep up all the great work pal! |
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| TranceLover007 |
Thanks for kind words. I’m really happy that you like this song. This is what keeps me going – my music.
Cheers from Seattle. |
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| Gimenez |
| Hey this sure sounds good. Keep up the good work. I am a n00b myself so I can not advice you much on what to do better on it. |
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