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*NEW TRACK* Nightlife
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| Suli Salerno |
I think soundcloud chopped off the part that looks like a penis at the end for some reason???!!! Oh well just know there is the last breakdown. Before it ends 10 seconds later. Didnt miss much and I am too lazy to repost.
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| sako487 |
The intro is great, But i would like a stronger kick in the beginning.
Also your percs are too normal and a little bland. Try adding some more high hats for a little air. Your mixdown seems fine but you might want to chop of a little of the highs from your pad. Your lead that comes in after your second little break is just a little out of no where, try and implement that during your intro to make it a little tease, them BAM, bring it in. Just work on the technical side and youll have a solid track. |
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| Suli Salerno |
| quote: | Originally posted by sako487
The intro is great, But i would like a stronger kick in the beginning.
Also your percs are too normal and a little bland. Try adding some more high hats for a little air. Your mixdown seems fine but you might want to chop of a little of the highs from your pad. Your lead that comes in after your second little break is just a little out of no where, try and implement that during your intro to make it a little tease, them BAM, bring it in. Just work on the technical side and youll have a solid track. |
Thank you for your input, however I must defend my track from your own personal likes/dislikes. The kick was made to made pretty light. It's more of a lounge piece than trance. Kind of a combo of the two. The one solid thing I can agree on you with is the modification of the high's. As far as your "BAM" theory if you could predict that you would like something like that there, then whats to say no one else will and call it out as easily as you? Kind of defeats the whole purpose of being original don't you think? This is music not a formula. You either like it or you don't. What say you? |
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| DJ Blitzkrieg |
| I agree. I think it need to lead in more to that transition. It's way to abrupt as it is now. |
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| Suli Salerno |
| like i posted earlier... that suggestion makes things sound too cookie cutter. |
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