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New Melodic Trance - Opinions?
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Shoes
Hi, I've just uploaded my new tune, called Firemoor, and would like some opinions on it.

I programmed all my own synths, too!

http://www.soundclick.com/util/Down...ng.cfm?ID=91579


Or http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5of6_music.htm if you haven't got broadband/too lazy to d/l :)
Lightworks
dl'ing now, i'll come back later and edit the post ;)

greetz,
LW
Shoes
Cheers, Lightworks. I want people's opinions & critisism so I can get it the best it can be before I upload to Mp3.com (I don't really want to wait 5 weeks, find out it's crap, then upload a revised versopn, which takes another 5 weeks) ;)

Anyone else?
Lightworks
hey again ;)

the basic melodies are there, but i think it misses something... also, try to clean up the track a bit more, there seemed to be alot of reverb that shouldn't be there (try to shorten the reverb time a little). the beats could be a little bit louder, they're quite supressed when the lead plays.

other than that, a good basis, but needs some work ;) try to get rid of that fruity sound and it'll be ok ;)

good luck!
LW
Shoes
Ok, thanks for the comments Lightworks. It's only my thrid Fruity tune, so I guess it will still have that Fruity sound :)
Lightworks
No worries mate, mine sounded just like it, and for quite a while. It's only the melodies that count at this part i guess... and if it sounds good, why not keep it eh? ;)

Take care,
Wim/LW
eLe_vatE
I think the production work here is quite good for a third fruity loops track, so keep it up. However, the tune has some really nasty clashes with the bass, and itself! at places, parts of the tune are nice though :)
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