Please work on it, has a lot of potential.
Melody line is great and your build up is awesome.
Another good one man.
msz
+1, post again when you have more; sounding good.
TranceLover007
This one really stuck in my head. Please work on it man, this could be really good track.
Keep this on rolling man.
I can only show you the door, but you have to walk through it yourself.
Owsey2008
Very hard to judge a short sample like this. Couldn't hear anything wrong with it though.
cryophonik
Yeah, I agree with Owsey - what's there sounds great, but it's mostly just an intro. It has a bit of a VNV Nation vibe to it - kinda dark, futurepop sound - I like that! Be sure to post the final version!