Over the last few days these sound/melody stack in my head and I couldn’t get rid of it. It was really fanny feeling because I couldn’t do anything else at home, so on Tuesday and Wednesday I decided to give it a try and spend few hours working on it. This is an intro only, it will take more work but if you guys can tell me if this is something which makes sense to pursued, I would really appreciate.
It is battle between me and my music and I’m losing it.
cryophonik
I was listening to some ambient stuff before this and forgot to turn my speakers down before that kick came in - I think it's safe to assume that my coworkers know that I'm not getting much work done! :rolleyes: :stongue:
Anyway, this is very cool TranceLover! I love that bass line and the pads/arp are a nice combination. Definitely finish this! This could be a very cool track to add some vocals to! ;)
parafrNalia
Since you comment on like every post, I feel I have to comment on yours. ^_^
I like it, the bass is cool, and I love the upward scale thing.
The one thing I can think of (I know it's got work to be done but,) the kick gets a little bit buried when everything is going on. I mean, I don't know how you want it to sit in the mix though.
Keep at it, could be a really good track.
msz
keep working on it, your mix is getting pretty muddy/unclear. nice melody and ideas here. i wouldnt say ur kick is doing too bad, in parafanilia's track the kick is way more faded.
tehlord
There's absolutely some mileage in what you've done so far. Before I lose my inspiration where it stops now I can see the track instantly stripping back to a minimal kick, bassline and some percussion and a very monotone vocal start alternating between the notes B and C, then a few bars later incorporating G (higher then the B and C) and so on and so on.
You've got a good ear for melodic ideas and as with the other track i'd only suggest using some more reverb and delay to bring the track alive a bit more.
I'm not not 100% convinced with the choice of bass sound but the melody and tempo is spot on.
parafrNalia
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Originally posted by msz
keep working on it, your mix is getting pretty muddy/unclear. nice melody and ideas here. i wouldnt say ur kick is doing too bad, in parafanilia's track the kick is way more faded.
lol, you douche. :p
agreed, though lol.
msz
ahaha:tongue2
Owsey2008
I commented on this over at another forum, but I'll give you a bump :p Good work!
sako487
Really happy and bright track, good job.
TranceLover007
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Originally posted by cryophonik
Anyway, this is very cool TranceLover! I love that bass line and the pads/arp are a nice combination. Definitely finish this! This could be a very cool track to add some vocals to! ;)
Thanks Cryophonik for your comment. Now I’m really seriously thinking about vocal in this track, you are right on this. You got me thinking.
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Originally posted by parafrNali
Since you comment on like every post, I feel I have to comment on yours. ^_^
Hi ParafrNalia, don’t feel like you have to comment on my track, but I do appreciate though. I was hoping that people will express they opinion base on quality of the music not because they feel obligated to do so, but as I said before I do appreciate anyway lol.
++Msz , as always thanks for advise man.
++Tehlord, you looks like have a lot of great ideas what to do with this track – big thanks man. I’m considering some of your point/ideas how to construct this remaining part of this track. Cheers for taking your time to listen my music.
++Owen, many thanks for give it a run and you comments. See you on another site man.
TranceLover007
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Originally posted by sako487
Really happy and bright track, good job.
I'm glad that you like it man.
Keep up the good work on this site.
Cheers from Seattle.
parafrNalia
Maybe I worded that incorrectly. I just feel that you deserve constructive criticism from others, since you so freely provide it for us.
You seem to be one of the better producers on here, so that's reason enough. :)
