| Richard Butler |
Typing as I listen in;
Kick is lacking a bit in power and a bit too much in the mid frequency range.
Quite like the pluck sound.
Bass is dull sounding and draggs along.
Old fashioned snare roll (like blackbox 1994.
Break - don't like those 2 organ type sounds. Lead comming in is quite nice but melo is a bit hard to follow with that loud bell thing comming in early.
BUILDUP - really non existent. That is something you have to get right. Yours needs tons more work and is way too rushed and has no tension or drama plus that blackbox snare roll.
CHORUS - no real vibe or energy.
That bass line is like an anchor dragging away pulling the track back.
Mate I think my feedback sounds harsh but I can only be honest (we all say we love simon cowell for his honesty so we should love honesty wehn directed at our own tracks).
Again sorry to be harsh but I think you need to start by getting just the kick and bass sounding sweet and then build from there.
Cheers |
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