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[not finished trance] Ground White
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| adi_hanson |
Hi all , been at the production lark quite a bit recently since i was made redundant(unemployed).
This is the first draft of a tune i made and its quite unpolished and im having nightmares after the break , so im just wondering if you can lend an ear and make a few suggestions for me?
as usual its a full 320 mp3
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Cheers in advance. |
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| tehlord |
I think the track is at it's strongest about 1/4 the way through when you have the double offbeat bassline going, it's quite chilled at that point and could be re-introduced after the break with a nice wide pad.
the piano sound is a tiny bit harsh but you've mentioned it's a rough mix so not really an issue right now. |
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