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Lyion - White Wings [Prog/Uplifting] - Need your feedbacks/comments!!
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| sako487 |
| You are REALLY good man, great job |
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| IceColdWater |
| quote: | Originally posted by sako487
You are REALLY good man, great job |
Thanks alot dude !
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| Richard Butler |
Nice track and well mixed. Intro is very good. Break is nice but a bit generic sounding classic piano trance.
On no - in the chorus your bass volumes / resonation is all over the place at my end. I always find getting all the bass notes to sound the same volume a pain in the @rse! I did a thread on this. |
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| beach1 |
| Nice. Very pretty track. I find the piano melody gets a little too cheesy in one part, but that's just my personal taste. |
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| IceColdWater |
@Richard Butler
Thanks for your comment ! As for the bassline , its probaly because of the mid bass I guess.
You see , the mid bass in the song is actually recorded from Sylenth1 , because I wanted to save CPU lol..
So I recorded 2 instances of the bassline , one simply playing E notes and the other one playing the chorus.
Maybe the one playing the chorus is ed up... Idk lol will have a look.
@beach1
Thanks for the reply dude .. As for the melody.. Well its everyone's taste I guess. |
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| darthseph |
I'll agree that the piano melody gets a bit cheesy but only because its drawn out. Otherwise, nice work man.
If you are looking for trying to take the track to a next level. Hit me back with a copy to shop to the Swarm. I would ask if you decide to do that, until I can tell you whether or not the Swarm will decide to sign it, you'd stop other distribution.
Best of luck in future works. You've got a knack for song presence that's for sure! |
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| IceColdWater |
| quote: | Originally posted by darthseph
I'll agree that the piano melody gets a bit cheesy but only because its drawn out. Otherwise, nice work man.
If you are looking for trying to take the track to a next level. Hit me back with a copy to shop to the Swarm. I would ask if you decide to do that, until I can tell you whether or not the Swarm will decide to sign it, you'd stop other distribution.
Best of luck in future works. You've got a knack for song presence that's for sure! |
Thanks for the reply darthseph , I'm glad you like my song.
While honestly I feel that it would be great to try sending it to SolarSwarm , But right now I don't think it is the time yet.
I mean , I'm only 15 this year and I'm from Singapore(Means I'm not really born in those trance countries lol..)
So right now I'm just doing these stuff for fun... haha. |
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| darthseph |
| quote: | Originally posted by IceColdWater
Thanks for the reply darthseph , I'm glad you like my song.
While honestly I feel that it would be great to try sending it to SolarSwarm , But right now I don't think it is the time yet.
I mean , I'm only 15 this year and I'm from Singapore(Means I'm not really born in those trance countries lol..)
So right now I'm just doing these stuff for fun... haha. |
No worries. The thing to remember for us is that we want to get quality out there. That's something I here in what you've got here. Don't let the boundaries of a country deny the fact that you've got a gift man. I know that there are other artists out there that are equally young too.
Still though, keep making music and moving forward. Spread the gift as best you can! |
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| IceColdWater |
| quote: | Originally posted by darthseph
No worries. The thing to remember for us is that we want to get quality out there. That's something I here in what you've got here. Don't let the boundaries of a country deny the fact that you've got a gift man. I know that there are other artists out there that are equally young too.
Still though, keep making music and moving forward. Spread the gift as best you can! |
Thanks for the kind words darthseph!!
Btw , May I know the artists you are talking about? Wanna check out their work too. |
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