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Sako K - Through the night[attempt at trance]***UPDATED***136bpm
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sako487
Well my first attempt at trance, and an OK one I think. Worked on it all through the night, hence the name.

Some feedback would be nice

Thanks

Project26 33 by sako487

Kept the old one if you want to compare

Updated the track with a new mixdown and brought up some more sounds and took the supersaw strings off to give it more clarity. This time I want some really technical critique. Mainly on the mixdown. Thanks again for at least listening! =D

PS Might even restart with EQ'ing tommorow and see if I can reach more clarity.

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Through the night by sako487

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Rainy Sunrise 136 BPM by sako487

136 BPM
TranceLover007
I will run this tomorrow morning if this is OK with you.

Cheers.
tehlord
quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
I will run this tomorrow morning if this is OK with you.

Cheers.


You'll love it ;)



great piece of music that.

The kick and bassline are completely spot on!

I'd maybe high pass the hats a bit more and also the synth chors in the first third of the track as they sound a tiny bit muddy. I'm only on crappy buds at work though so it might be just these.

The only thing I think needs looking at is a main hook. I'd create something that appears in the first half before the break (which is superb btw!) and then really kicks in after the break.

I love it! :D
TranceLover007
We have so much talent on this site that it is a fun to login every morning knowing that you will have some great music to play today, unbelievable.

So much energy and dynamics is in this track that I had to close my eyes and let that surge of energy go through my body.

Beautiful melody line, well balance sound and well mix – that’s what I can say, after four runs.

I can’t give you any suggestion just because this would be only my opinion/view on this track and you as producer know exactly what would/wouldn’t work for you.

Fantastic job man, hopefully you will get sign or get release on TA Unite album.

You just unleashed your creativity sako487.
sako487
Umm, wow?

I think this was one of my worst attempts at trance because I couldn't get a decent melody going(I tried everything)

Thanks you two also for the great feedback! Means a lot.

With all those comments I'll be sure to work on this.
sako487
Updated
tehlord
Such a great track :)

I still think it needs a riff to lift it, but that'll either come to you or it won't ;)

I'm on crappy work PC again but the mix still sounds good. It might be worth EQ more of the bottom end out of the arp'd bassline (the one that you hear in the last few bars) as you probably don't need it in the mix and it'll leave a bit more room.

To lift the top end a bit maybe try a high shelf on the master channel and give it a small boost around 2-3k but only a db or two. Just A/B switching it on and off and see if it gives you some sparkle without adding any harshness.

Great stuff

:thepirate
Voyager1019
hey , i liked the tune a lot

i could listen it again , its lot fun , unfortunately i wasnt able to listen to it loud cause i got to rest my ears a bit

i love the part after 3.40 , very nice transition on 4.0 and then great melodic part and nice rhythm introduced further

nice first attempt on trance
TranceLover007
I'm on it right now, wooow, damn it, it is really good.
sako487
Thanks a lot for the comments. I'm not so sure if I want to submit this to the TA album cause its not my best track. What do you guys think?

TranceLover007
Why not, this would by all of TA's decision so if we all like it, will be on TA album. Personally I love it.

If I can suggest couple of things:

1) Bass - make more visible in main part (3:00 to 5:00).
2) Synth - 3:59 is barely visible but is awesome, adjust volume on that.

It would be really good addition for our TA Album man.

Well done.
sako487
quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
Why not, this would by all of TA's decision so if we all like it, will be on TA album. Personally I love it.

If I can suggest couple of things:

1) Bass - make more visible in main part (3:00 to 5:00).
2) Synth - 3:59 is barely visible but is awesome, adjust volume on that.

It would be really good addition for our TA Album man.

Well done.


For sure man, thanks
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