TranceAddict Forums Archive > DJing / Production / Promotion > Music Producers Promotion New Trance Track- JoshthebeaR- Celestial Twilight (demo) View this Thread in Original format Joshthebear http://soundcloud.com/dj-intrigued/...estial-twilight Check it out... tell me what you guys think!!! Grazba hey josh :D !! first things first !! the melody is cool ^^ really even if its repeated many times !!! your track could be Great !! the CRITICS : - your intro and outro ARE BAAD !! (fade in and fade out :( ) but its a demo maybe u'll change it ! -your DRUMS are weak bekoze your samples are weak try to find out good kicks and all that stuff ! -your build up need to revised !! that's all hope mmy critics help you !! cheers Joshthebear ya man thank you.. yea that is not the full track it is jus main section. why it is faded in n out at beginning and end. i will def go back and look at all that. ty Nick Cenik You need a much stronger kick IMO. :) chrisspob hi josh for me its real hard to comment i dont have a clue where this track is going its the same alway through and the progressions dont really do much for me but i guess if your new to making music this aint bad to what ive heard, i agree beefier kick needed tho and good luck keep at it CLICK TO RETURN TO TOP OF PAGE

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