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Feedback on a track in progress?
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| Final Call |
I've started on this tune about a week and a half ago. Now i'm totally stuck :( Any feedback would help! I noticed that the track is missing something, maybe a main lead melody to keep it all interesting but for some reason i can't get anything down.
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| RichieV |
| can you post it as an mp3 so I can download it and add something |
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| Final Call |
| quote: | Originally posted by RichieV
can you post it as an mp3 so I can download it and add something |
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| Eric J |
| Its actually really good, but I like this type stuff. It sounds very "progressive techno" in its current state. Frankly, you could probably just add another break toward the end and call it done. Good job. |
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| RichieV |
| can you tell me the bpm ? |
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| Final Call |
| quote: | Originally posted by RichieV
can you tell me the bpm ? |
128 BPM.
Thanks Eric, though i was trying to aim more for prog house.
i had an idea of just bringing back the bassline from the first breakdown and building it into a breakdown. Introduce a sparkly floating melody and build around that, rise it up and round it back out.
But i hate how i constantly feel like there's something missing but i can't pinpoint exactly what lol |
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| Beatflux |
| I liked the first part. The track loses momentum after the first break. |
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| RichieV |
this melody would work
Just using a detuned saw so you can hear it. You would obviously have it filtered in and add effects so it isn't so dry to mix with the track.Also adjust the timing so it grooves more and I don't think it is quite matched up but you get the gist. It also works over the chord change which is neat.
melody |
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| Final Call |
| quote: | Originally posted by RichieV
this melody would work
Just using a detuned saw so you can hear it. You would obviously have it filtered in and add effects so it isn't so dry to mix with the track.Also adjust the timing so it grooves more and I don't think it is quite matched up but you get the gist. It also works over the chord change which is neat.
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oh interesting. could you post the midi? |
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| RichieV |
| Bb - Db - C - Ab - Eb - F Eb- Db |
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| Final Call |
| quote: | Originally posted by RichieV
Bb - Db - C - Ab - Eb - F Eb- Db |
thanks! |
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| RichieV |
| but don't just keep it to those notes. It is just a frame. |
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