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Melodic Tune!!!! please give your opinions
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| smallSHEEP |
I decided I would write tune on my keyboard. Took me about 3 hours it's only a bit of fun so don't rip the arangments (there are none.) I called it corrosion.
Tell me what you all think... Cheers
Click here (save as) to download file
p.s. the quality is a bit e but i can't help that
A new updated version is avalible:Click here (save as) to download file
The quality here is much better |
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| smallSHEEP |
| Hello, is there anybody kind enough to tell me what they think of my song!! :D |
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| dj_qub |
| with the right instruments and synths + add a little effects and you could have a good song |
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| smallSHEEP |
| cheers, it would need quite a lot of work on it though. |
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| DJ Chrono |
ahhhhhhrg, the distortion :eyes:
maybe turn the volume down before exporting abit ;)
Its a nice base to work off of.. but the tune that comes in at 1:00 is a bit cheap sounding, in terms of synth work. Right now it kind of sounds like an old super nintendo game noise. But if u fixed that up, it should be pretty good. |
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| smallSHEEP |
Thanks for all the help. I have reworked the song a bit from your advice. I would really appreciate if you could tell me if you like it more or less. P.s. The distortion is gone now.
You can download the new version at Right Click save as (Fast site) |
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