The bitcrushed formant/vocal sound is a great hook, could use some reverb automation maybe?
Bassline would work well with some distortion.
woscar
Chalk this one up to personal taste, but this is pretty bad mate. Sounds like generic "electro house" with farty basslines.
sebastian klone
This is an electro house track, its a bit dated the sound unfortunately.
Change the bassline and perc and use the vocal in a different kinda hook style and youll have a more techno edged track
Evolve140
Good feedback, should be enough to get it going in the right direction.
sako487
Great kick(though it needs more punch), nice chopped up vocals, awesome bass, snare could use a bit more high end. Nice electro song here, good job
Evolve140
Thanks Sako, much more intuitive feedback than "this is an electro track". I mean it does need work, but I'm not "going" for anything. I just started trying to be creative and working on something from scratch and this is what happened.
sebastian klone
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Originally posted by Evolve140
Thanks Sako, much more intuitive feedback than "this is an electro track". I mean it does need work, but I'm not "going" for anything. I just started trying to be creative and working on something from scratch and this is what happened.
your header says 'tech house, deep basslines and groove'
its not tech house and neither does it have a deep bassline, myself, i was just stating it was an electro house track. whether you were aiming for that or not, thats the result youve come up to so far.