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| akz |
Hi there, Im new to the forum.
I need some feedback in a new working project. I love this place and always been learning from you guys. For that thanks. :)
I dont usually post in forums bcause im still learning from everything and my language is not very good either.
Anyway Please give me some constructive feedback on this track ive been working on. Post anything and add the reasons! Even if is bad as hell. I'll be very thankful!
Here is my soundcloud link: http://soundcloud.com/abrache/z-project |
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| EddieZilker |
Nice little atmospheric piece but the bass sounds a little anemic - might want to bring it up just a nudge - especially in the kick - to balance out the mix a little more. The high, high end seems very bright, too. Anything > 12,000Hz ought to be lowered by 1-2dB.
I really like this tune - it tells a story, in a very haunting way. You have a gift for setting up atmosphere. It would be great to add vocals to it.
While I understand you're posting your work in this forum because you want constructive feed-back, you are at the level where you ought to feel safe posting work like this in the Music Producer's Promotion Forum. Your chances of getting meaningful feedback are much greater, there. |
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| akz |
| quote: | Originally posted by EddieZilker
Nice little atmospheric piece but the bass sounds a little anemic - might want to bring it up just a nudge - especially in the kick - to balance out the mix a little more. The high, high end seems very bright, too. Anything > 12,000Hz ought to be lowered by 1-2dB.
I really like this tune - it tells a story, in a very haunting way. You have a gift for setting up atmosphere. It would be great to add vocals to it.
While I understand you're posting your work in this forum because you want constructive feed-back, you are at the level where you ought to feel safe posting work like this in the Music Producer's Promotion Forum. Your chances of getting meaningful feedback are much greater, there. |
thanks mate. Will be working on your advices on bass and bright. I think its because i added a multiband cmpressor with wrong settings in the master channel.
Great feedback in track! I appreciate the words! thx!! |
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| evo8 |
| bit of a mad track, sounds like 3 or 4 different tracks depending on which part you listen to, like the bit after the last break the best.... |
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| TranceLover007 |
It was my observation to, but I kind of like it, hmmm, it's different, not bad at all.
Cheers |
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| akz |
thanks for the answers! I guess the multi-track stuff is something i have to work! :)
I remastered the bass and bright and the kick got a little more space. But maybe the percussions and other elements eats kick's tail frequency? :S |
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