| EddieZilker |
Love the music bed - wouldn't really change anything there. The lead, however, is a little crazy-making.
Maybe it's my tastes, but I thought you might try layering it with more sounds - it feels very plastic. I also think it's a little too prominent in the mix and that it doesn't really develop enough. It seemed very static, making occasional departures from previous patterns but, like a bad choice of room-mates, never really fitting in with the rest of its housemates.
The song has a lot of potential, though. I hope you keep working on it. |
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