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Cedric K. - Not this time
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| Cedric K. |
Hey there,
posted a couple of tracks here before and ppl told me it sounds boring, no interesting synths and bad production.
This one is a little bit different. made it with ableton and hope you like it!
http://soundcloud.com/cb-ck/not-this-time-original-mix
Pls tell me how to improve!
(btw I know the arrangement is pretty weird...) |
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| tehlord |
I think the arrangement is fine, in fact one of the strongest elements of the track.
Just a few little issues to my ears :-
The kick is a bit weak, could use more oomph
The main lead is a bit monotonous and loud. Try reducing the level a bit and automating some modulation (filter cutoff etc)
There's room for more transition FX, sweeps etc.
Try using a quiet, evolving, wide stereo pad in the background in a few places.
Try delaying the snare by a few milliseconds on the track delay, it'll add some nice relaxed groove to the track.
Nice dark atmosphere though, pretty gritty
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| Cedric K. |
Ok thanks for the good and gelpful critics!
I'll try to follow the hints you gave me! |
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