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Kabukicho (Edo Edit) [Minimal]
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| MrJiveBoJingles |
Decent tune here.
I think you should lose the noise buildup, though. Too many minimalish tracks use that to end the breakdown, and it has been a cliche for a while. I bet you can come up with a better way to build tension.
The vocal thing was funny and a nice touch. |
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| KC. |
| Cool thanks :) I'm gonna try and take that noise out... I actually added it on my 4th edit LOL. It definitely is cliche. |
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| Az |
some great idea's in this, not sure the layout is what I'd want for a track of this sort, second breakdown is probably a bit too long.
I'd bring the flute out a lot more, it's whats adding variation to your melody, yet it's almost hidden behind everything else |
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| KC. |
Old habits LOL used to be really into progressive like 10 years ago.
Will try out those recommendations. Thanks. |
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| woscar |
I really liked this dude, would definitely like to hear more of your stuff.
I'd go with Az's advice and make the background flute a bit more prominent. I have no idea what I'm talking about here, so take my advice with a grain of salt...I would also lower the volume on the main melody because it's way too loud in comparison with the rest of the track. |
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| MrJiveBoJingles |
woscar in the Producer Promo forum? :wtf:
[Sorry for the off topic post.] |
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| woscar |
| I do check here every now and then, but rarely comment unless I really have anything significant to add. :D |
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| EddieZilker |
| This is a nice tune. Nice mixing giving it kind of a dark atmosphere, but groovy, none-the-less. |
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| novastorm |
| Really cool mix of sounds here, not my usual style but really enjoyed listening (twice). Dynamic and eerily atmospheric.. it should come with Ziyi Zhang leaping through a forest or some :) |
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