I really would appreciate some feedback/criticism so that I can work on my producing skills during my next track.
Thank a lot!
Cheers,
LOON
darthseph
I hope you encoded it in a lower bitrate because the low end felt a little weak in my headphones at work. Could be the work computer though.
The bright pad felt a bit dated in my opinion. It works, but it just felt overly nostalgic to me.
Loads of energy in the low end complimented by a nice lead in the track. I'm not sure how I feel about the track but it does warrant another pass for sure.
2nd pass - Once the main lead kicks in the track reminds me of flying... kind of like Adam Szabo's stuff.
Eh... send me a 128 faded version of it and I'll submit it for possibility of Swarm signing if you'd like. There are a good number of elements in it.
LOON
Thanks for the feedback darthseph!
I see what you mean regarding the bright pad. For my next track I'll try to do a better job there..
I've tried to make the low end a bit stronger, but mastering is not my strongest point.hehe..
Updated version is now posted on Soundcloud(and the player above).
