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Anakratis - Duemilanove (Rough Draft) [WIP]
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| msz |
| i think this might be the best work i've heard from you. nice melody, no complaints there. |
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| tehlord |
I really like where this is going so far. When the first small drop happens at 2.26 it really works well, although I can see a lead line taking it to another level. I can also see a sweet chord change soon after the track finishes now so that the bassline would go from playing Ab,Bb then C to then playing F, G then Ab.
I think the mix is still being hemmed in by the BX5s but there's little you can really do about that right now!!
You've probably still got a ton to add but some extras sweps and swooshes in the intro would probably lift the feel a bit too.
Excellent work so far though, I'm really looking forward to hearing the final version! |
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| Anakratis |
@msz Thanks man! :D
@tehlord Yeah, these monitors aren't very effective. Gonna have to think about getting others, but I'm glad that you like it, and I'll look into those chord progs! :) |
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| novastorm |
| Hey man, well this is gonna be huge I can tell already! I'm not sensing much in the sub bass range but apart from that its a really nice full sound, great synths - very Sophie Sugar sound going on here. This is a buildup yeah? The melody is strong enough to continue on into the main section, you'd just need to add some extra chord changes or maybe a high pad counter-melody to differentiate it. Great start! |
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| TranceLover007 |
This is some serious effort going on in this track already with great sound and the way you structure this track - well done buddy.
You have so much flexibility build into this first part that you shouldn't have any problem with development of the rest of this track.
I would use tehlord ideas to spice up your track.
Well done and keep them coming M.
Cheers |
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