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Sheen Trickz feat. Jiddu Krishnamurti - Reflections (Original Mix) + (No Vocal Edit)
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| Lunar Phase 7 |
Hey,
Listening now. Nice solid kick and atmosphere at start!
Love your pads, what are they?
Personal preference, maybe lower the filter cutoff on your bass? Make it more growly?
The arp is lush, and the vocal sample is weird but works haha. Nice saw lead.
Good work overall man! |
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| Sheen Trickz |
Bout pad pm me:)
Vocal - lol, hehe this is an indian philosopher I liked to add bits of his voice to one of my tracks and thats how it "looks" like ;)
thanks for the opinion:)
any more ? |
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| Owsey2008 |
Things come together far too quickly for my liking. I personally prefer dance music to slowly evolve!
I dig the pads. Something about the track reminds me of another piece from around 2000, but I can't put a name to it.
I think the bass might sound nice if you filtered it down a little. With some polishing it could be a pretty cool track.
Sorry if my comments are a bit useless. I'm not really in to this sorta thing! |
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| TranceLover007 |
Sorry man, I was on your track yesterday and didn't make any comment :conf:
Here we go, love this overall atmosphere with great support from your pads. Fx are cool arps are very effective and this vocal addition is good.
This is what I would look at to rework/modify/improve:
- this kick in the beginning (I was overwhelm)
- add extra low freq bass to support your existing one - this is only my suggestion, my preferences and if you feel like I'm telling you big nonsense that is fine with me man.
Overall this track has a lot of potential and I would love to listen this final version in the future. Good luck.
Cheers |
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| EddieZilker |
| I pretty much agree with every post in this thread - if you do everything, they suggest, this could truly be a massive tune. Currently, it's got a lot of potential, but it's a little jilting in its progression. |
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| novastorm |
| Hey man, this is pretty solid, has that classic trance feel! You could modernise it though with a little more thought to the arrangement/progression. I notice the clarity of the kick drops out as soon as the bassline comes in too, apply some EQ cuts so they don't compete for the same space in the freq range. Really love some of your sounds here though especially the main lead - reminds me of Steve Morley - Reincarnations a track I absolutely loved back in '99 :D |
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| Sheen Trickz |
thanks for opinions
any else?
cheers |
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