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Skyflux - So What... (Original Mix) - Soundcloud . 138 BPM Uplifting Trance
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| Nightshift |
| pure awesome. i cant comment on the low end right now cuz its night but everything seems balanced but the high end feels like it needs more sparkle. awesome work though |
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| IceColdWater |
| quote: | Originally posted by Nightshift
pure awesome. i cant comment on the low end right now cuz its night but everything seems balanced but the high end feels like it needs more sparkle. awesome work though |
Sparkle? As in? |
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| Owsey2008 |
Nice melodic ideas, but nothing in this track stood out for me. It's quite generic and cheap sounding in my honest opinion. Maybe that was your intention, though.
If I were you, I'd work on creating some interesting catchy elements and a more unique structure. I'd still maintain the energy as it is, because I guess it's quite good. |
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| IceColdWater |
| quote: | Originally posted by Owsey2008
Nice melodic ideas, but nothing in this track stood out for me. It's quite generic and cheap sounding in my honest opinion. Maybe that was your intention, though.
If I were you, I'd work on creating some interesting catchy elements and a more unique structure. I'd still maintain the energy as it is, because I guess it's quite good. |
Well personally , I agree with you , this track is kinda generic in general.
Maybe its because.. I'm a ASOT fan? Haha I don't know. |
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| djtomo |
| Sounds great to me! ASOT FTW! |
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| Richard Butler |
Quite driving but generic sounding, with a classic pad and piano break that just won't get inside people. It needa a lot more sparkle, you know like coldblue does so well.
TBH it's tough making classic epic trance stand out now as thousands of people are doing it very similarly. Coldblue for me is the exception - just listen to his timing and each sound is immense. |
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| IceColdWater |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Quite driving but generic sounding, with a classic pad and piano break that just won't get inside people. It needa a lot more sparkle, you know like coldblue does so well.
TBH it's tough making classic epic trance stand out now as thousands of people are doing it very similarly. Coldblue for me is the exception - just listen to his timing and each sound is immense. |
Cold Blue? |
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| novastorm |
| quote: | Originally posted by IceColdWater
Cold Blue? |
Erm seriously? Hehe listen to this -
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-yA5jLJNPWY
I found this track impressive too, mainly the buildup though - the midbass layers are AWESOME, they create a real drive and a beautiful texture. Unfortunately after the break it kinda loses that drive - the melody is nice enough, but you sort of hope for more based on that awesome tense buildup. I suspect some tweaking of the main lead synth and the piano sound would help though. A stronger lead would make the arp melody seem less "generic", as most people seem to be saying. Having said that I'm sure several smaller labels would still sign this as it is, I just think this has a little more untapped potential that you can bring out :) |
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| IceColdWater |
| quote: | Originally posted by novastorm
Erm seriously? Hehe listen to this -
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-yA5jLJNPWY
I found this track impressive too, mainly the buildup though - the midbass layers are AWESOME, they create a real drive and a beautiful texture. Unfortunately after the break it kinda loses that drive - the melody is nice enough, but you sort of hope for more based on that awesome tense buildup. I suspect some tweaking of the main lead synth and the piano sound would help though. A stronger lead would make the arp melody seem less "generic", as most people seem to be saying. Having said that I'm sure several smaller labels would still sign this as it is, I just think this has a little more untapped potential that you can bring out :) |
Thanks for the tips , and yes the lead is kinda generic , since it's just a saw pluck layered with a supersaw lol. |
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| dseabra |
Well...I don't liked the drums...dunno how to explain but sounds too "noized"...the melody is very beautifull Liked...the breakdown effect is very amazing...the patches no...need to be changed...to simple and it makes the melody lost his magic...
Need to be re-worked...if you re-work well with this melody I believe that you can break the rules of insanity with this music...
Good luck!!! |
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| IceColdWater |
| quote: | Originally posted by dseabra
Well...I don't liked the drums...dunno how to explain but sounds too "noized"...the melody is very beautifull Liked...the breakdown effect is very amazing...the patches no...need to be changed...to simple and it makes the melody lost his magic...
Need to be re-worked...if you re-work well with this melody I believe that you can break the rules of insanity with this music...
Good luck!!! |
Thanks for the tips!
And I guess , many people do find the lead cheesy o_O |
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