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Daniel Seabra - My Last Breath (Original Mix)
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| EddieZilker |
It seems like the further down they go in the forum, the better they get. This one.;......... #@%!^& What the was that?
I'm writing the best review you were going to get from me and then you decide the track needs a ing sonic abortion right at 1:51. Really? You don't think you could have made a decision to not keep that, there? Well, you posted three tracks in close succession on a single day so I can understand how your decision-making might be a little impaired.
Oh, and your snare-attack-build sucks!
Alright... Oooh pretty birdies. Break-beat on the break at a lower tempo... feeling glitchy... kind of groovy... But then you ditched me, by just saying, "Okay, well I'm done with that and I've kind of worked myself into a corner and I know, what I'll do... I'll just resume the tempo and put a bunch of high-frequency synths and wash the whole ing thing with reverb and then put in one or two more sonic abortions to really piss off the listener."
No wonder NONE of your tracks have any replies.
Sounds like you make this with one too many beers nearby. |
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| dseabra |
Well, first of all, thanks for the reply. Being a good or a bad reply you used your time to write it, so I will learn with it...
Sorry for my english..
Well...lots of critics...you just made the music that I have liked a lot appear like a big pile of ...
First of all, I want to know why all of that "fury" in the critic...you could just tell me what you think and done...don't making me feel like an idiot...another thing...I don't got why the critic about I am uploading and showing 3 musics of mine here...if you say that's because I am not a forum participant, that's ok, I got the idea and I will start to be more participative...but if not I want to know where's the problem...
Well...whatever I am just want to know why my action did this reaction...to don't do that again.
Sorry if my posts bothered you or any other one... |
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| sako487 |
lolllll
i like it! |
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| EddieZilker |
| quote: | Originally posted by dseabra
First of all, I want to know why all of that "fury" in the critic...you could just tell me what you think and done...don't making me feel like an idiot...another thing...I don't got why the critic about I am uploading and showing 3 musics of mine here...if you say that's because I am not a forum participant, that's ok, I got the idea and I will start to be more participative...but if not I want to know where's the problem... |
You know. I do try to be nice and try and be patient. I criticized three of your entries, last night, but this one was by far the worst while also capable of demonstrating the most potential. Apart from that, however, there was your attempt at glitch (I think) which took the form of a very loud distortion introduced inopportunely, completely out of rhythm, and with a tooth shattering loudness that, quite honestly, I don't think should be listened to; especially with headphones - and I was using headphones, last night.
So, yeah. You pissed me off. It was stupid to put something that loud, right in the middle of a mix like that. I'm trusting you, as a listener of your music, that you're not going to engage in some form of audio terrorism with the music you put out. That includes signals which aren't going to bust up my monitors or with my ears - or just give me a jarring burst of loudness. If you don't want harsh criticism, don't post music with harsh noises.
Would you rather I blew smoke up your ass and tell you that you should send the song to a label? For sake! Where's the value in that? I mean, really, what good is getting feedback if it's just a bunch of smoke up your ass and not really the truth. You can bitch and moan about how my words could have been phrased differently, and I probably could have put my critique in a nicer, more user-friendly fashion, but 1) that's no fun, 2) that's dishonest, 3) it's dishonest because it cheats you have the value of having someone's authentic reaction to your work.
If you can't or won't find value in that, I don't know what to tell you. |
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| dseabra |
Well...thanks anyway...you know how to "punch" someone with words, but I agree with you in some points...
So whatever...I am here to learn the taste of the people for production...
Which patch of the music you are telling me that is loud? I am not producing in a good ambient, and my audio monitors aren't that good also, so I can't identify that "NOISE" and loudness perfectly because for me all the spectrum sounds good.
About the glitch effect, Okay, I will change it and I will remove the "noized" effect...and I will see what people think about it...
Thanks for the post, now with your second post I feel more "relaxed" to be criticized by that way.... |
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| EddieZilker |
| quote: | Originally posted by dseabra
Thanks for the post, now with your second post I feel more "relaxed" to be criticized by that way.... |
Honestly, if it wasn't worth criticism I wouldn't have criticized it, at all. Glad you feel better. |
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| DJ_Rafnel |
I dig it, keep it up.
The glitch doesn't sound off timing either, just a bit to loud, maybe lower the volume or something there on whatever you used it on...automate it down maybe.
Personally i think the track has some seriously nice writing. Awesome piano melody.
The glitch in the breakdown i would take out, i think it just doesnt fit in good there but none the less cool ideas.
Anyway, keep it up dude!
-Wayde Rafnel- |
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| dseabra |
Yes, I've left this glitching only to try make someting "new" or some hard EFX on it...I saw that the people doesn't liked it at all...no problem, I will change it...
One thing that I am learning here is that most of my details taste aren't the same taste of most people so let's change it anyway...
Thanks for the reply! |
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| msz |
| hey man, this sounds nice! a little bit problems you have with the mix i sometimes have, its hard to control good sounds. |
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| dseabra |
Thanks a lot mate for the reply...
I think that I don't mix a music...my mixing quality is so poor that I can call it a "frustated prototype of mixing" lol...
But no problem...I am reading books about production and I will be better than that in the future...when I reach my studio with accoustic and a good pair of monitors, everything will become better for mixing, right now I produce using a room that is impossible to reach a good reference and I don't know the conecpts about the effects and mixing...I will learn them soon... |
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| Kysora |
Agreed with Eddie to an extent, I don't think the criticisms he pointed out completely trashed the song for me but they definitely could have been done better.
I don't think you should be bashed for it, though, you did have some nice ideas that were worth trying, they just didn't work.
I might actually take a stab at remixing this, I rather enjoyed the melodic aspects of the track, especially the piano. |
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