any feedback would be great, im a beginner so any help would be appreciated.
thanks :p
EddieZilker
Yes. I like it - it's not quite blowing me away, but it's decent enough. Don't know about the Super Saws - Every time those are used, you're running the risk of making a track cliche'. The loops are also posing a bit of a problem in that the track, in parts, gets a little repetitive but, overall, it's decent enough that I'd say continue working on it, making sure to give every part a little more space in the next mix.
Nemesis44
Hey there,
Gave this a listen and here is what I thought.
You have some really nice ideas coming together. I'm with Eddie on the Supersaws part though.
The other thing I have noticed is that the track seems very claustrophobic as everything is very very compressed in my ears (I know, probably will come back and say you haven't used any lol :) )
I think the mix needs a bit of attention but can't make up my mind if it's levels or clashes. I think the electro lead and the gated line share the same frequency range, and although you have sorted it with panning, I think if this were played in mono they would start to cancel each other out. Have more of a question and answer relationship with them perhaps? This would also give your track a bit more breathing space.
Percussion needs a bit more work as it's not driving the track along, it behaves more like an after thought than a key factor.
There is no real sub bass to speak of, but then I is the sub bass junkie so perhaps I am biassed.
